Thursday, 12 July 2012

Kal Raat

Kal baithe the
khana kha k
TV pe puraane
black and white gaane laga k

Power corporation walon ne
apni kripa kuch yu dikhayi
Humari colony ki
bijli di katwayi..

Khidki kholi jo kamre ki
log aapas mei bol rahe the
Halki hawa k sath
ped bhi masti mei jhoom rahe the

Humne bhi uthaya apna
bichhona aur takiya
Aise mausam mei chhat pe na soye
to aur kya kiya

Kaale aasma'an pe
safed baadal yu faile the
Brownie k upar
vanilla ice cream se dikh rahe the

Thandi hawa bhi dheere dheere
chal rahi thi
Bagal k ghr ki khidki bhi
zara zara si hil rahi thi

Sitaaro ko dekhte dekhte
khwaabo'n ko sajate sajate
kab neend aa gayi pata na chala
kab light aa gayi pata na chala

thodi der mei neend khuli to
ice-cream pighal chuki thi
Aur brownie bhi
apna rang badal chuki thi

Fir uthaya humne
apna takiya aur bichhona
Fir aake pakad liya
apne bistar ka wahi apna kona...

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30 comments:

  1. Anil Kath12 July 2012 at 01:40

    aha lovely..wonderful..amazing ....can't say more then that..:-)

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    1. meenu12 July 2012 at 08:57

      thanks a lot Anil... need not to say more :)

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  2. Vishal Satani12 July 2012 at 01:42

    Gujarat me aa jao power cut ka problem hi nahi rahega........
    By the way good one :)

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    1. meenu12 July 2012 at 08:57

      gujraat aane ki to nhi pura India Gujarat jaisa progress kare ye dua zarur karungi.. thanks a lot for praise :)

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  3. Unknown12 July 2012 at 01:47

    Nice....

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  4. meenu12 July 2012 at 01:54

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  6. Sam12 July 2012 at 01:57

    Nice, rhythmic and sweet :)
    cheers!

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  7. meenu12 July 2012 at 02:10

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  8. meenu12 July 2012 at 02:11

    thank you Sneha Dear Cheers :)

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  9. Unknown12 July 2012 at 02:23

    really appreciable..... :) :)

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  10. meenu12 July 2012 at 02:26

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  11. Fari12 July 2012 at 03:07

    Great , in Poem the Beauty of natural are very much inn.. and your way to show it... great.

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  12. meenu12 July 2012 at 03:12

    thanks a lot Farhan :)

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  13. Chaudhari Suneel12 July 2012 at 03:46

    Nice one yar..u r on progress...keep it on gudluk :)

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    1. meenu12 July 2012 at 08:56

      thank you suneel.. bs duayein hain tum logon ki :)

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  15. risubrastogi12 July 2012 at 05:31

    aachi likhi hai aap ne kavita padh kar aur bhi aacha laga

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  16. समीर जोशी12 July 2012 at 08:43

    Hey.. U r very good poet.. Keep it up.. :) M also poet..bt not like u.. Kuch kuch karta hu kabhi kabhi.. Almost all are in Marathi.. 1 is in Hindi and 1 is in English.. :)

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    1. meenu12 July 2012 at 08:53

      thank you Sameer .. read your blog it's 2 in english 1 in hindi.. keep writing :)

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    2. समीर जोशी12 July 2012 at 08:55

      :O Thanks... I dnt kno when u read that.. Yes 2 English.. I forgot.. Anyways..Thanks..

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    3. meenu12 July 2012 at 08:59

      just now i read :)

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    4. समीर जोशी12 July 2012 at 09:35

      kk.. So nice of u :)

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  17. Anonymous12 July 2012 at 22:25

    Mishran achcha hai.. :-)

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  18. Arpita18 July 2012 at 05:14

    wow so simple n sweet ..i could actually picture it all :) beautifully written

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